todfox asked whether or not redrafts should be done at this stage or if one should wait until the finale of the project. I think it's up to you, the writer. If you are itching to have a rewrite now, after the explication, and would like some community feedback, go ahead and post a draft here. Members should be free to respond with what they see as places for improvement. Or, if you would like to wait until the very end to do one major revision, that is fully your choice.
In fact, if you revise your poem each day and would like feedback, you can post it. But on-the-fly revisions are sometimes not to the poet's advantage. It often behooves one to accept much criticism from all corners and ruminate for a while.
Later today, I will post another nuts-and-bolts entry (I meant to do that yesterday [Saturday], but the day got away from me).